Grizlaw,
I see what you mean, but....
First AP says:
seven Montana football players have been in trouble with the law
Pretty innocuous description. They do go into more detail near the end of the story.
Then the quote by O'Day:
"I think there's a lot of misunderstanding of the situation at Montana State. The piece that doesn't add in here is the educational piece."
This highlights APR and skims over crime.
The AP immediately follows with:
Kramer, who coached the Bobcat football team for seven seasons, was fired in May shortly after former wide receiver Ricky Gatewood was arrested on drug charges. Gatewood was the sixth current or former MSU football player arrested. Of those, one has been charged with murder along with a former MSU basketball player.
Another factor in Kramer's firing was the fact that the football team was losing scholarships for failing to meet NCAA academic standards.
To match O'Day this should've led with the second paragraph about academics, then a not so misleading second graph that matched O'Day's words. The first sentence would've been appropriate had it just ended with "...in May shortly after a sixth former player was arrested as part of a drug ring." It could've followed with something about another player that was currently on the team was also arrested in connection with these crimes. I/m 50/50 on mentioning the murder, but if this is about Kramer why throw the basketball player in there? In a nutshell it would've matched O'Day's comment without all the details.
I think it was Dennison who said in another article, "We don't go looking for transfers, they come looking for us." A good question would be, "Why? And what difference does it make in terms of who ends up at UM." Obviously its a good team, so transfers find it attractive, but are they also looking at UM, because UM has a history of taking guys with prior problmes. And does the fact that UM doesn't go looking mean they have to take guys with prior problems. His comment leads one to believe that UM is some sort of elite place, if so then why doesn't who the school selects to transfer mimic that?